如何在雅思寫作中舉例子？

如何在雅思寫作中舉例子？

如果有想要在雅思寫作中拿非常高的分數的烤鴨們，其實應該學習學習如何更好地舉例。其實，雅思官方明確表示過，高分作文里必須要有這么一條：

Present a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully 

extended  well supported ideas.

為什么要舉例子呢？不少人一定認為，面對雅思寫作考試，我能給出越多的觀點就越有機會拿高分。而事實上，你反過來想才有機會拿高分?；貞浵缕饺绽镂覀兒团笥训牧奶?，是不是都這樣去解釋一個問題呢...

——今天天氣好冷??？

——是嗎？

——對啊，今天班級里同學都穿上了大衣呢，明明上個月還在穿短袖呢...

用真實的例子去解釋特別有說服力，因為有理有據有細節。所以，雅思寫作中你也要學會這么去解釋觀點。

讓我們再看個例子:

題目是：Today people are traveling more than before. Why is this the case?（如今人們旅行的次數比以前多了，為什么？）

請寫出完整的一段文字，來解釋上面這道題。

寫法一：

I think more people are traveling because people are earning more money these days  they can afford to travel. Additionally, flights are much cheaper than they were in

 the past. Moreover, people have very stressful lives these days  need to go on 

holiday. Furthermore, children expect to be taken on holiday when they are off school during the summer. Finally, it is good for the family to spend time with one another.（我想，越來越多的人正在旅行，因為如今人們賺了更多的錢，而且他們可以去旅行。此外，航班比過去要便宜得多。此外，人們的生活非常有壓力，需要去度假。此外，在暑假期間離開學校時，孩子們期望休假。Z后，這對家庭來說是很好的彼此相處的時間。）

寫法二：

In the past, air tickets were only for the rich  famous because most salaries could  cover the price of a  flight to a foreign country. This meant that the majority simply stayed at home  took their holidays domestically.However, this has all changed with the creation of budget airlines. Low-cost carriers, such as Ryanair in Europe  Tiger Air in Asia, have meant that anyone can save up  travel to a new country, with prices starting as low as $1.（在過去，飛機票只給富人和名人，因為大多數的薪水不能支付去外國的機票的價格。這意味著大多數人只是呆在家里。但是，隨著廉價航空公司的成立，這一切都發生了變化。低成本的航空公司，如歐洲的瑞安航空公司或亞洲的老虎航空公司，都意味著任何人都可以儲蓄。去一個新的國家旅游，價格低到1美元。）

假如你現在就是考官，看完這兩段后你認為哪一段更有說服力？

相信你不會認為是首段吧，盡管它寫出了許多有說服力的觀點，但總感覺少了點支撐。而第二段雖然只有一個觀點“機票便宜了”，但說得有理有據！可你會真去驗證航空公司到底價格下降多少嗎？其實并不會。

我該如何尋找例子呢？

到這兒，肯定有不少小伙伴依舊困惑，到底應該如何找例子呢？

考官是不會有時間驗證你的例子是否真實（當然能真實是比較好的，這樣考官更能感同身受）

下面教你兩招，寫一個有水準的例子。

①以政府名義

For instance, a recent poll by the HK Government found that 68% of people who attended single sex schools would have preferred to have gone to a mixed school.

②以個人經驗

In my local city they have installed bike lanes  places  you can safely park your bike  this has encouraged thousands of people to stop using cars.

寫出一段有說服力的段落，即需要完整的觀點，同時需要具備一個看似真實且有效的例子。